Video of Pitch and Pitch Feedback

Feedback:

• People liked the concept of the narrative
• They think that we need to show the female dancer's through dance at the end
• To focus more on the girl
• Dancing needs to be execute to a good level in order to impress the audience 
• Some people got confused with the narrative
• I need to establish the emotions of the dancers throughout the whole video
• The whole video needs to planned and checked through by other people

Response to Feedback

• I will take on Katie's response and alter the idea
• I will make a clear plan and check with people to make sure they will understand the plot and story