Video of pitch

The feedback:

• we were asked what sort of shots that we would use to depict the relationship within our video, we will use close up shots to see how intimate they are with each other and as we go through the video as there relationship gets worse we will use wider shots a long shots to show how they are drifting apart. 
• originally we had the idea of doing the video in rewind (so everybody walking and moving backwards etc) but then we got told about another idea of using flashbacks to create the sense of travelling in time as the start of the video will be the end of the relationship and throughout rest of the video going back to see what the relationship was before and at the beginning. 
• we was given the idea of taking the whole video in one shooting but in reverse as there are already some well known videos that have dine this, but we are going to start the video at the end of the relationship while throughout the video we will be going back through moments where they were happy and at the end of the video it will be the start of the relationship. 
• we were asked to show how we were going to show the relationship and how they are breaking up and it is coming to an end, for the video we will be starting with them further away from each other as she is breaking up with him, and throughout the video they will be getting closer to each other to show there relationship being good and very intimate. 
• we was also given another idea of having some dialogue at the beginning to show that the relationship is ending and then the music can start and go through finish to start. 
• we was also given something else to think about, this being to try and enhance on the emotions of the two people and try to show how much they love each other and how much they hate each other from beginning to end. 


What we are going to do from this feedback:


• to show how we are going to get the emotion from the relationship across to the audience we will use a variety of different shots and angles, some of these will be close ups of the couple to show the intimacy of their relationship and to show their emotions for each other, and medium to long shots for when they are getting more angry with each other and arguing and for when they break up. 
• originally our idea was to make the video but in rewind but from our feedback from the class we have decided to make the video begin from the end of the relationship and as the video goes on it will include flashbacks to their happier moments and to when they were having fun and we will end the video with the start of the relationship. 
• we was given an idea of taking the whole video in one big shooting (no cuts) but we decided to stick with the idea of cutting and having jump cuts between different shots to show that time has changed and they are different emotionally around each other. 
• from the idea of using dialogue in our video we have decided not to use and dialogue and just have them acting out the break up. 
• to enhance and embrace the fact that they have emotions for each other we will try to tell a story with the actors in how they act and the way they are in each shot of the close ups when they are closer together and the further away shots when they are more apart from each other.